rkt.india Posted December 20, 2011 Author Posted December 20, 2011 My new poetry, please read and comment on it.
bulbul Posted December 20, 2011 Posted December 20, 2011 Awsome... only problem is i dont understand Hindi :giggle: any way man i cant write these even in dream :nice:
8ankitj Posted December 20, 2011 Posted December 20, 2011 This one is from the time when I was 15 years old :D रेगिस्तान में दो बूँद पानी, किसी समुन्दर से कम नहीं मेरी तनहाइयों में तस्वीर तुम्हारी, किसी हमसफ़र से कम नहीं
rkt.india Posted December 21, 2011 Author Posted December 21, 2011 This one is from the time when I was 15 years old :D रेगिस्तान में दो बूँद पानी, किसी समुन्दर से कम नहीं मेरी तनहाइयों में तस्वीर तुम्हारी, किसी हमसफ़र से कम नहीं nice
gaurav92 Posted December 21, 2011 Posted December 21, 2011 Ek baat batao bhai, aapke paas itna time kahaan se hota hai yeh sab likhne ka? Har doosre din ek naya pace sensation dhoond laate ho gaanv gaanv gali gali jaake, toh yeh sab likhne ki fursat kab milti hai aapko? :hmmm:
rkt.india Posted December 22, 2011 Author Posted December 22, 2011 Ek baat batao bhai' date=' aapke paas itna time kahaan se hota hai yeh sab likhne ka? Har doosre din ek naya pace sensation dhoond laate ho gaanv gaanv gali gali jaake, toh yeh sab likhne ki fursat kab milti hai aapko? :hmmm:[/quote'] are aap poetry ke baare me batao...aam khao...guthliya mat gino...poetry likhne me mujhe kuch jyada time ni lagta...agar main likhna shuru karu full time to poetry ki line lag jayegi daily...ye to maine ab kaafi din baat likhi hai 2-3 poetry. Yaar I posted my movie synopsis, did you read that yet in a new thread named Octopus. You did not leave any comment there. Please read and tell your opinion about my basic Concept.
gaurav92 Posted December 22, 2011 Posted December 22, 2011 ^Zaroor :nice: Ek kaam karo us thread ko bump kar do, will read it:nice:
Singham Posted January 20, 2012 Posted January 20, 2012 RKT u r awesome dude. Obviously u know what u r doing., great...:two_thumbs_up:
Sarkar Posted January 20, 2012 Posted January 20, 2012 Main Pyaar ka Deewana Hoon Ek Ladki ke liye Anjaana Hoon Dil mein Bechaini Hain Ishq ka Betaabi Hain Kyun Main Deewana Hoon
Old guy Posted January 21, 2012 Posted January 21, 2012 im speechless i rspect u even more rkt bhai :two_thumbs_up:
rkt.india Posted January 21, 2012 Author Posted January 21, 2012 Thanks for Singham, Sarkar, and Sabby.
NeutralCat Posted January 21, 2012 Posted January 21, 2012 You could turn those poems into songs as well, great stuff man, great stuff.
rkt.india Posted January 21, 2012 Author Posted January 21, 2012 You could turn those poems into songs as well' date=' great stuff man, great stuff.[/quote'] yes when times comes up, certainly.
Old guy Posted January 26, 2012 Posted January 26, 2012 Na mila hun main apni apekshaaon se abhi tak Dhundh raha hun apni asimit ichchaao ko abhi tak Batora hai ek-ek tinka banane ko inka gharonda Aur fir inme se kuch ko kuchla hai to kuch ko raunda Magar har kadam ye nayi milti jaati hain Na khatam hota ye safar isme raahein nahi khulti jaati hain Yaha to khud sambhalna hi mushkil Inki tadaad ko sambhaalna to aur bhi mushkil hai Ab kyu itna vaythit hun main Bas ik insaan tathakathit hun main Na mere bas me hi kuch hai Na khud se jawab milta kuch hai Jaan jata hu inko jab hota hun inse rubaru Milti hain yein meri aarzoon se hubahu Kaash ke rok pata is jwaar ke uthne se Na hi kabhi kuch suljha hai inke is tarah jutne se Dosh inka hai magar naam mera Srot inka hai magar kaam mera Ummed karta hu ke ab inme nahi kho jaaunga main Chalta rahunga apne raaste aur in par kaabu kar paaunga main न मिला हूँ मैं अपनी अपेक्षाओं से अभी तक ढूंढ रहा हूँ अपनी असीमित इच्छाओं को अभी तक बटोरा है एक-एक तिनका बनाने को इनका घरोंदा और फिर इनमे से कुछ को कुचला है तो कुछ को रौंदा मगर हर कदम ये नयी मिलती जाती हैं न ख़तम होता ये सफ़र इसमें राहें नयी खुलती जाती हैं यहाँ तो खुद संभलना ही मुश्किल है इनकी तादाद को संभालना तो और भी मुश्किल है अब क्यों इतना व्यथित हूँ मैं बस इक इंसान तथाकथित हूँ मैं न मेरे बस में कुछ है न खुद से जवाब ही मिलता कुछ है जान जाता हूँ इनको जब होता हूँ इनसे रूबरू मिलती हैं यें मेरी आरजूओं से हुबहू काश के रोक पता इस ज्वार को उठने से न ही कभी कुछ सुलझा है इनके इस तरह जुटने से दोष इनका है मगर नाम मेरा स्रोत इनका है मगर काम मेरा उम्मीद करता हूँ के अब इनमे नहीं खो जाऊँगा मैं चलता रहूँगा अपने रास्ते और इन पर काबू कर पाऊंगा मैं this one was gr8! :two_thumbs_up: would save it and whenever i feel bad, or life is though would read it this para n line Na hi kabhi kuch suljha hai inke is tarah jutne se so true :hatsoff: u really are gr8 at this :)
cybervickey Posted January 26, 2012 Posted January 26, 2012 ganja patel, teri khopri mein teel, maroon ga danda, nikle ga aanda .
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