rkt.india Posted May 5, 2010 Author Posted May 5, 2010 koi to comment karo kuch....accha ya bura:pray:
Nova Posted May 5, 2010 Posted May 5, 2010 I like this best: ke vo yun karib thi mere jo zindagi ke baad bhi saath rehti mar kar bhi meri rooh bas usi ki baat kehti Striving for your love even after death....that must be something. Tere saamne toh Devdas bhi phika pad gaya re.
rkt.india Posted May 6, 2010 Author Posted May 6, 2010 I like this best: ke vo yun karib thi mere jo zindagi ke baad bhi saath rehti mar kar bhi meri rooh bas usi ki baat kehti Striving for your love even after death....that must be something. Tere saamne toh Devdas bhi phika pad gaya re. u can see my poetry thread for more http://www.indiancricketfans.com/showthread.php?t=217384&highlight=poetry
Nova Posted May 6, 2010 Posted May 6, 2010 Have you posted your poetry in other forums? I wonder if there are any forums to discuss hindi and urdu literature. May be you will get a better response there.
rkt.india Posted May 6, 2010 Author Posted May 6, 2010 Have you posted your poetry in other forums? I wonder if there are any forums to discuss hindi and urdu literature. May be you will get a better response there. nooooo
Desi Cartman Posted May 6, 2010 Posted May 6, 2010 Kavi Mahashaya .. aapk Lurker Mia ko PM kurain .. sirf woh he aapke kaam ki sarahna karnay layak hai .. baki ke sabhi posters yahan sirf Gai Ka doodh thread ki sarahna kur saktay hain
rkt.india Posted May 6, 2010 Author Posted May 6, 2010 Kavi Mahashaya .. aapk Lurker Mia ko PM kurain .. sirf woh he aapke kaam ki sarahna karnay layak hai .. baki ke sabhi posters yahan sirf Gai Ka doodh thread ki sarahna kur saktay hain guru ji apna to kaam post karna hai....tippani karna aap logo kaam hai...koi interested hai to kar dega...ke acha hai ya bura....koi nahi hai to koi shikayat nahi.....
Nova Posted May 6, 2010 Posted May 6, 2010 guru ji apna to kaam post karna hai....tippani karna aap logo kaam hai...koi interested hai to kar dega...ke acha hai ya bura....koi nahi hai to koi shikayat nahi..... Sahi hai :hatsoff:
rkt.india Posted May 11, 2010 Author Posted May 11, 2010 terrific' date='r u a poet by profession?[/quote'] no sir ji..i dont think there is profession like poet and at the age of 25..do u think i will get a profession like that..bt i am aiming fro film writing in future..
DomainK Posted February 8, 2011 Posted February 8, 2011 Thats some good stuff. You are good in this. :nice:
gaurav92 Posted February 8, 2011 Posted February 8, 2011 Superb mix of hindi and Urdu in this poem.Excellent stuff rkt bhai
rkt.india Posted February 8, 2011 Author Posted February 8, 2011 Superb mix of hindi and Urdu in this poem.Excellent stuff rkt bhai thanks:icflove:
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