rkt.india Posted December 14, 2011 Posted December 14, 2011 Hey guys. I am posting a short synopsis of my movie script Octopus-The ARMS which I had talked about before. [ Any comments!!!
Sooda Posted December 14, 2011 Posted December 14, 2011 There has GOT to be a Vishal, Kriti and Yogesh love triangle in there right??!! Im guessing Ashutosh is a bit old and has a wife a son, needs money badly hence wants to do this. But put a love traingle in the mix, get Salim Sulaiman to do the music and itll be chhakkaas. More seriously, I think the Avijit character sounds a bit too enigmatic. I know he is meant to be, but there seems to be an almost supernatural element to him. The Idea of Octopus is a good one, but putting that in a film setting will be a challenge. Also what is it that the four do for ARMS thats makes them criminals on the run, thats pretty crucial. And how do they infiltrate Octopus and kill Avijit. Hmm. I think the answer to that last one is to get Rajnikanth to play Ashutosh.
Sooda Posted December 14, 2011 Posted December 14, 2011 Perhaps make Yogesh (or a new character altogether) the head of ARMS (also change the name of ARMS- i know it gores well with Octopus but Im not sure about it, or at least change the acronym so it is not called 'system') and make Yogesh and Avijit be working together behind it all. I do not think Octopus would hire Avijit as CEO if he was head of ARMS already- surely that is too busy a role in itself. Also Kriti should choose Vishal in the end, a win for the nerds in the world. Kriti should be super hot... what is Nargis Fakiri upto nowadays...?
rkt.india Posted December 14, 2011 Author Posted December 14, 2011 There has GOT to be a Vishal, Kriti and Yogesh love triangle in there right??!! Im guessing Ashutosh is a bit old and has a wife a son, needs money badly hence wants to do this. But put a love traingle in the mix, get Salim Sulaiman to do the music and itll be chhakkaas. More seriously, I think the Avijit character sounds a bit too enigmatic. I know he is meant to be, but there seems to be an almost supernatural element to him. The Idea of Octopus is a good one, but putting that in a film setting will be a challenge. Also what is it that the four do for ARMS thats makes them criminals on the run, thats pretty crucial. And how do they infiltrate Octopus and kill Avijit. Hmm. I think the answer to that last one is to get Rajnikanth to play Ashutosh. No love triangle between Vishal, Kriti, and Yogesh. Love angle is there, but it no triangle. Not four, only Vishal and Ashutosh become criminal. Yogesh is the policeman in charge of the crime these both commit. Ashutosh is a police officer who is suspended due to circumstances and Yogesh is a junior of Ashutosh. Vishal is one guy who thinks he is dead even when he is alive due to some circumstances in the past, but he is a genius, an extraordinary mind. All these things are scripted by Avijit Singh Chauhan. He defines the word genius. His evils make him a devil. His name suggests he is Invincible and that is what he maintains all throughout. Even when people think his saga has ended, he rises again. There is no super power to him, but he is ambitious and is the real USP of whole script. There are some surprising elements in it which can certainly leave audience shell shocked.
rkt.india Posted December 14, 2011 Author Posted December 14, 2011 Perhaps make Yogesh (or a new character altogether) the head of ARMS (also change the name of ARMS- i know it gores well with Octopus but Im not sure about it, or at least change the acronym so it is not called 'system') and make Yogesh and Avijit be working together behind it all. I do not think Octopus would hire Avijit as CEO if he was head of ARMS already- surely that is too busy a role in itself. Also Kriti should choose Vishal in the end, a win for the nerds in the world. Kriti should be super hot... what is Nargis Fakiri upto nowadays...? Whatever I have written is completely well thought. Regarding, Avijit being CEO of Octopus and Director of the ARMS, I clear it, every one knows he is the Director of the ARMS, but Octopus is an underground organization and is involved in illegal activities but with a purpose. Octopus are among us, but we do not know if they are people of Octopus. They do different works. They are political leaders, they are soldiers, policemen, they are intelligence officers, but in hindsight they also work for Octopus and no country is spared. They provide crucial information which help people of Octopus to continue working for their motive, but somehow Avijit Singh Chauhan becomes a man of huge ambitions and he takes all the control and he starts using and kill people for Octopus' and also his personal ambitions. Ashutosh and Vishal become two of those victims.
rkt.india Posted December 14, 2011 Author Posted December 14, 2011 too confusing:(( Yes. It is very complex a concept, but a full script will erase all the confusions. It is very hard to write a short synopsis of such a script which has so many unavoidable things in it to tell.
rkt.india Posted December 22, 2011 Author Posted December 22, 2011 Interesting story' date=' :nice:[/quote'] ye to srif ek jhalak hai...screenplay is even more interesting and full of exciting events.
rkt.india Posted December 22, 2011 Author Posted December 22, 2011 Toh yeh taiyaar ho gaya poora? tyyaar to hai...but final draft kar raha hun ab
rkt.india Posted December 22, 2011 Author Posted December 22, 2011 Cool' date=' good luck :nice:[/quote'] thanks:icflove:
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