JaFanatic Posted July 3, 2013 Posted July 3, 2013 Martha grumbled as the alarm went off signaling her to wake up. She opened her eyes angrily and looked for the alarm clock she had bought yesterday. The only reason Martha had was because she had finally gotten a job but she had little chances for mistakes. Martha didnt want to get fired on the first day for being late. She finally stopped it and slowly sat up on her bed. She tried wiping the sleep from her eyes but it didnt really work. Martha thanked herself for setting the alarm on her clock a hour before she had to really get up to take a shower. Martha tiredly got up and walked towards the bathroom and quickly as she could while tired got undressed. She turned on the water and let it go full blast and then stepped in. Martha then rememberd about her enemies that were surrounding her. Her father who didnt like how she had led her life, her ex boyfriend who she had emberassed at a party on accident, and her old boss who she had stole 31 dollars from before when times had been tough. Martha thought she heard a door shut but it was probably from the neighbors next door. She suddenly felt a tiny feeling of panic and started to wash her hair of the soap in it. She then saw a shadow cover the shower curtain and she swung it open. She recognized him and was about to scream his name but a kitchen knife plunged into her heart. She was stabbed 31 times and left with the water still running while washing her blood away. MURDER IN APARTMENT ON FIFTH AVENUE 9:23pm The body had been found by a neighbor who became concerned when she heard the shower run all night and the next day. When police examined the body they found that she had been stabbed 31 one times and left in the shower while it still was running. Police have three suspects but they cant confirm who it was. If you know anything report to the police. WHO DO YOU THINK DID IT? Solved by Roshanrocks!! :hatsoff: Mystery behind the house of thousand moans :bow:Three Suspects Father Ex-Boyfriend Boss Murder took place at 9.23 pm so the neighbor is absolved of the crime... I am most interested in this sentence..."She recognized him and was about to scream his name" 1. I guess a daughter wont call her father by name... so I rule out the father.. 2. The ex-boss wont have the key to her appartment, so I rule him out.. 3. I guess the killer is her ex-BF who will have the key to her appartment, and who might have known the story of the 31 dollars Now we have a new case(#2) to solve
JaFanatic Posted July 3, 2013 Author Posted July 3, 2013 will post a better short story next time :nervous:
DomainK Posted July 3, 2013 Posted July 3, 2013 The neighbor woman. She says she heard the shower run all night and the next day when we know that Martha woke up early morning and started the shower.
carnish Posted July 4, 2013 Posted July 4, 2013 The neighbor woman. She says she heard the shower run all night and the next day when we know that Martha woke up early morning and started the shower. :two_thumbs_up:
nikred Posted July 4, 2013 Posted July 4, 2013 The Inn keeper who is obssesed with his dead mother. :dontknow:
PriyankaSR Posted July 4, 2013 Posted July 4, 2013 The neighbor woman. She says she heard the shower run all night and the next day when we know that Martha woke up early morning and started the shower. But it says, "saw him" while the neighbor was a woman. That's the only thing keeping me from taking the neighbor's name.
nikred Posted July 4, 2013 Posted July 4, 2013 The Inn keeper who is obssesed with his dead mother. :dontknow: none of you seen alfred hitchcock's psycho? No. Is it good?
velu Posted July 4, 2013 Posted July 4, 2013 She then saw a shadow cover the shower curtain and she swung it open. She recognized him and was about to scream his name but a kitchen knife plunged into her heart. She was stabbed 31 times and left with the water still running while washing her blood away. post those 3 suspects ..
kubrickian Posted July 4, 2013 Posted July 4, 2013 No. Is it good? One of the best movies you will ever see. Its a Hitchcock classic. The shower scene is legendary and scared people from taking showers in motels during its time.
Sachin=GOD Posted July 4, 2013 Posted July 4, 2013 its obviously Dexter Morgan - the words "serial killer" are written below his avatar :sherlock:
nikred Posted July 4, 2013 Posted July 4, 2013 One of the best movies you will ever see. Its a Hitchcock classic. The shower scene is legendary and scared people from taking showers in motels during its time. My previous post was in reference to that movie. I thought it was obvious.
JaFanatic Posted July 4, 2013 Author Posted July 4, 2013 post those 3 suspects .. think so Her father who didnt like how she had led her life, her ex boyfriend who she had emberassed at a party on accident, and her old boss who she had stole 31 dollars from before when times had been tough.
velu Posted July 4, 2013 Posted July 4, 2013 think so old boss :hmmm: she took away 31 dollars and her boss stabbed her 31 times ( one stab for every dollar ) maybe :dontknow:
JaFanatic Posted July 4, 2013 Author Posted July 4, 2013 old boss :hmmm: she took away 31 dollars and her boss stabbed her 31 times ( one stab for every dollar ) maybe :dontknow: thats my guess too :two_thumbs_up::hatsoff:
PriyankaSR Posted July 4, 2013 Posted July 4, 2013 old boss :hmmm: she took away 31 dollars and her boss stabbed her 31 times ( one stab for every dollar ) maybe :dontknow: :agree:
beetle Posted July 4, 2013 Posted July 4, 2013 Psycho was a good movie for it's time. The boss ...one stab for each dollar.....
DomainK Posted July 4, 2013 Posted July 4, 2013 old boss :hmmm: she took away 31 dollars and her boss stabbed her 31 times ( one stab for every dollar ) maybe :dontknow: Psycho was a good movie for it's time. The boss ...one stab for each dollar..... That's just way too obvious to be the solution.
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